Episode 1: Before the sun finds the reef, the reef finds its Hum.
- Marnus Fourie
- 4 hours ago
- 17 min read

There was once a tale, and only if you held the key could you unlock its magic. I am about to share that magical tale with you.
Deep below the surface, where the ocean shifted from bright morning blue to something richer — the colour of midnight mixed with honey — the Coraloom Reef stretched out like a city that grew itself.
It was one of those cities that grew the way the best kinds of things in life did.
Towers of coral rose in flame orange and soft violet and the particular pink that only existed underwater, at this depth, in this light. Starfish napped on barnacle rocks like small, five-pointed dreams.
Tucked into every crack and crevice was a bloom of fluffy, waving creatures that looked exactly like exotic flowers. They called themselves the anemones. They felt every beat first. And they were never, ever wrong. About anything.
At the very centre of the reef, older than any gold coin, than the pirate’s sunken ship, and even older than Atlantis, stood the Rainbow Coral Hum Tree.
The elder fish said it had always been there. It looked a little like a tree and a little like a coral. Almost like it had decided to be both without asking anyone’s permission. Its roots went deeper than anyone had ever dived. Some rumours said that the tree’s roots went as deep as the earth’s core.
Every morning, as the first thin light filtered down from far above the surface, something moved through those deep roots. A vibration. A slow, low trembling. Like a note plucked on the string of an ancient instrument. It was a quiet kind of magic, where the mangrove wood and wire came alive. As though waking from a deep forest slumber and speaking in a tone only the soul could feel.
It travelled up through the stone and into the coral branches, and the branches carried it outward through the water, and the water carried it in sound waves.
As always, the anemones caught it first. They swayed once, twice, three times. A sleepy pufferfish rolled over in her seagrass bed and hummed it back without opening her eyes. A seahorse tapped his tail against a live rock, and the coral at its edges sparked gold.
The three baby eels stirred. It was time to rumble! The pebble weight lift champion, Tommy, wrestled his two younger brothers out of bed to declare himself champion of the worldwide waking up from bed tournament! Or WWB for short. They all tumbled over each other, laughing.
And when you looked just outside the window, you would find yellow-brick roads carved by volcanic eruptions, connecting the neighbours of the reef.
Slow.Warm.A very good morn.The whole reef took a breath.
And then...
THE MORNING HUM
As sung by the reef of Coraloom
A sandy clam by the mallbanged her shell like a drum,the reef heard the ripple call:"Wake up! The day has come!"
Stack the coral, shine the shell,ring the anemone morning bell!Tie up the kelp and sweep the sand,the tide is turning, take your stand!
(tap tap tick, crabs keep the beat)(swish swish swish, fins in the street)
In Coraloom the morning glows,with every hum the Hum Tree grows!We hum, we hum, from dawn to sun,we HUUUUM till the day is done!
A clownfish sings, his pan’s on fire:"The tide is in! Rise higher, higher!"Sniff, “Oh no! The breakfast burned!Just keep the beat, that’s my concern!"
BONK.
A hermit crab walked into stone.He felt ashamed and all alone.He looked around.Shake it off!Shake it off!"I meant to do that...""Moving on."
In Coraloom the morning glows,with every hum the Hum Tree grows!We hum, we hum, don't miss the fun,we HUUUUM till the day is done!
Up above, the lanterns sway,jellyfish drift into day:"Gloooow... gloooow..." soft and slow,painting gold on waves below.
Baby eels burst in too loud:“WE WANT TO SING!!” they shout to the crowd.They start to dance and fall around,They end up making farting sounds.
Drop your shells and spin round twice.Someone shouts, "WHO STOLE MY RICE?!"A puffer giggles, rolls away,But no one stops a line dance today.
In Coraloom the morning glows,with every hum the Hum Tree grows!We hum, we hum, both big and small,there's a place and a song for one and all!
From fin to flame, from reef to sun,we're many voices, but we are one!We hum, we hum, come everyone,we HUUUUM till the day is done!
We HUMuntilthe dayisDONE!
ONE, two, THREE, four,five, six, SEVEN, eight—
They broke out in laughter as the last note rang through the water like a bell.Then it faded, and the reef settled.
The mall was open.
Barry the barracuda and Terry the tiger-fish immediately began arguing about the price of sea cucumber at full volume, as they usually did. Aunt Fran the frogfish’s shopping bag came undone and sent six clams rolling across the seafloor in completely different directions. Her husband, Harry the hogfish, chased a runaway shell down the market lane, hollering things that were definitely not polite.
Mama Angela, the angelfish, hummed past while her baby bluefish, Byron, blew bubbles at Sonny the starfish, who found this deeply, personally offensive.
This was Coraloom. Everything hummed. Everyone mattered.
"ONE, two, THREE, four,five, six, SEVEN..."
Right in the middle of it all,while the reef sang bright and wide,in a tangle of kelp like a knotted ball,slowly spinning upside down,inside... was Oana.
She took a breath as the music swirled,as the colours danced and spun,and somewhere deep in the humming world,it shifted... just for one.
"One..."Her first tentacle shimmered pink,like shells in morning light,"Two..."A flash of blue in a silver blink,sharp, electric, bright."Three..."Warm gold like the sun below,"Four..."Soft violet, drifting slow,"Five..."Green with sparks that popped in air,"Six..."Amber, steady, glowing there,"Seven..."Silver, soft as secrets flow,like moonlight dancing far below.
The reef leaned in.The current slowed.Something in the water... glowed?
"Seven colours, seven songs,spinning where the tune belongs!I chase the notes I've never known,I hum the parts not yet my own!
Up and down and fast and bright,twisting sound and bending light,if there's a song I've never found,I'll turn the whole wide reef around!"
A ribbon burst of colour flew,pink to green to gold to blue,it looped through stalls and swirled through space,and danced across each watching face.
A crab dropped shells.A fish spun twice."WHO TOOK MY—oh. This is nice."
"In Coraloom the morning grows,Do you know where the next song goes?I hum, I roam, I race the sun,I HUUUUM what hasn't yet begun!"
She stretched her glowing arms out wide,a wave of colour, far and wide,and for a breath, the reef stood still,caught in her wild, wondering will.
But tentacle number eight drew near.No glow, no spark, no sound, no cheer.No colour danced, no music played,just quiet... like a note delayed.
The song around her softened low,not gone, just waiting, down below.
She tilted slightly, curious.
“Tentacle Eight... serious?"
No answer came.No light. No tone.Just something... not yet fully known.
The silence felt not wrong, not dim,but like a space that waits within.
One day, she thought, I'll find your song.You’ve been patient all along.
Behind her, gently, voices grew.The reef returned to what it knew:"In Coraloom the morning glows,with every hum the Hum Tree grows…"
Oana blinked.
Then... SNAP!The kelp pulled tight.She spun once left.Then spun once right.
"Oh come on… wanna fight?”
She tugged and twisted, looped and swung,grabbed some more but felt it stung.Then, fourth attempt, with one last kick, she popped out clean."...I meant to do that."
She smoothed her arms, she struck a pose, as if she'd planned it all, of course. Then she turned, as bold as ocean foam, and set off on her way back home.
The purple sea kelp only bloomed three times a year, and it only bloomed near the base of the Rainbow Coral Hum Tree, and when it did, Old Barnaby — who used it to polish his trumpet to a shine that could be seen from three reefs over — always asked Oana to fetch it. He said her tentacles were gentler than anyone else's. What he meant was that she was the only one willing to do it.But don’t tell Oana that!
"You've been trying to harvest this kelp for over an hour," said Shelby, drifting alongside her."It hasn't been that long," said Oana.“Remember the market lady with the clam display you knocked over? She said it has absolutely been that long.""The current knocked that over!”Shelby was small and sensible, with a very neat striped shell. He looked at the trail behind Oana: swirling water, drifting shells, and a few confused fish. He had seen it all before. "You are the current, Oana."They looked at the trail together and giggled.
It was true. When Oana was curious — which was always — all eight tentacles explored at once. This morning she had:
followed a trail of hermit crab shells halfway across the reef, convinced they were leading somewhere important (they were not);spent many minutes trying to squeeze all eight tentacles into a tiny sea cave, which she eventually managed, and then got briefly stuck;chased a spotted goby through the mud flats just to see how fast it was (don’t tell the kids, but she was really trying to eat it);and collected seven clam shells she found near the mall, examining each one as if they had pearls inside, but she found only sand and old seaweed.
"There were seven beautiful shells," she said, just for the record.“One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Seven shells full of sand," Shelby checked them all, and he knew a lot about shells. Because he lived in one. Duh!
"OANA!"
Old Barnaby lumbered into view. He was Shelby's cousin: a hermit crab who wore his shell the way serious musicians wore formal clothes — polished, dramatic, very French. He was holding his trumpet and looking at it the way you look at a puzzle. Puzzled.
He held up the trumpet. "I had been stuck on this piece for four days. One, two, three, four days. Oana. Listen."He played. It was almost right. Almost magnificent. There were seven notes that landed perfectly, and then, on the eighth, something slid sideways and the whole passage unravelled just slightly, like a knot that seemed secure until you tugged at it.Barnaby lowered the trumpet. He looked at it with great disappointment.
Oana tilted her huge head. The melody entered her silky, soft, silver, slimy, slippery, shiny seventh tentacle. She felt it settle right in there. And then, without quite deciding to, she began to play it back.Da da daaah de da da da DAAAH!
The eighth note landed. Perfect! It rang out through the water, clean and whole, and the coral nearby glowed a little in response — the way it always did when music was right.Barnaby stared.
“Sorry,” Oana said. “It just… I heard it and it got stuck and I…”“No,” Barnaby said slowly. He was still staring at the place in the water where the note landed. “No… that was it.”He looked at her, eyes wide now. “Play that again.”Da da daaah de da da da DAAAH!Oana played it again.
Barnaby closed his eyes and listened. Then he lifted his trumpet and played it back, and this time, the eighth note landed perfectly.He was stunned.
“THAT’S IT!” he shouted, nearly dropping his trumpet. “That’s the song!”He scrambled in a tight little circle, clicking his claws with excitement.“You found it! You actually found it! You’re brilliant!”
Then Barnaby turned back to his rock, trying very hard to look serious again.But the little happy clicks of his claws gave him away.It’s okay, though.Crabs walked sideways anyway.
On their way back home from Barnaby's rock, the market thinned out. The lanes got narrower, the coral grew taller and quieter on either side.
One by one, the jellyfish lanterns started to disappear.Fewer. Wider. Floating at odd heights, like a sky that couldn’t decide where its stars should go.
Perfect.
Oana lit up.“Oh, we are playing.”
Shelby didn’t even look at her.“We are passing through.”
“Same thing.”
“It is not the same thing,” Shelby cried.
“It is absolutely the same thing,” Oana beamed.
Shelby stopped.Slowly, very slowly, he turned to face her.
“…One round,” he said.
Oana grinned.
The lanterns glowed in gentle rings,like drifting lights on silver strings,they pulsed with sound, they breathed with tone,each had a rhythm of its own.
“Watch closely now,” said Shelby, slow,“these lanterns speak, they pulse and glow,you do not rush, you do not guess,you echo back what they express.”
Oana grinned, already bright,“Oh please, I’ve got this first one right.”
The first one hummed, a golden bloom,a soft, warm note that filled the room,it rose, it dipped, then played it twice,a simple start, smooth and precise.
Oana spun with flashing light,“I hear it once, I hear it twice!”She tapped it back with playful flair,the lantern began to dance in the air.
It shimmered bright, it glowed with cheer,as if to say, you heard me clear.
“I told you so,” said Oana, proud.“You rushed it still,” said Shelby, loud.“You caught the sound, but missed the space,there’s more to rhythm than just its pace.”
The next one chimed, a cooler blue,a sharper tone that cut right through,it rang out once… then held its breath…a magical pulse at this depth.
Shelby, determined to take his turn,watched, he waited, chose to learn,then matched it back with careful grace,each note returned in proper place.
The lantern deepened, calm and true,a sky full of stars, a shade of blue.
Oana crossed her arms and sighed,“Okay… that one I won’t deny.”
The third one buzzed, a restless green,the quickest rhythm they’d ever seen,it danced and skipped and changed its pace,then vanished quick without a trace.
Oana laughed, “Now this is fun!”and darted forward on the run,she tapped and spun and nearly fellbut missed the end by just a bell.
The lantern flickered, dimmed its light,not wrong, not harsh… but not quite right.
“I was close!” said Oana, fast.“Not close enough,” said Shelby, last.“I lead with speed!”“You missed the heart.”
The final lantern drifted wide,set softly from the rest aside,its glow was deep, its rhythm low,a quieter pulse beneath the flow.
It did not ring or snap or shine,it moved as if it’s older than time,a steady hum, both soft and strong,the kind you feel before it’s song.
Oana didn’t move this time.No sudden spin, no rush to climb.
She watched.She listened.Let it be.
Then answered slow and carefully.
The echo came,just one… then two…and settled inlike something true.
The lantern bloomed, not bright or loud,but full and still and quietly proud.
Behind them, all the lanterns glowed,now each echo no longer alone,their rhythms danced along the lane,remembered once… and played again.
“Rematch later?” Shelby said.
Oana lit from toe to head.
“Oh, absolutely.”
Shelby opened his mouth and stopped. Oana noticed."...What?"
Shelby didn't answer. He was looking ahead. Something in the water had changed.
Up ahead, half hidden behind a wide fan of sea fern, the market lane ended and a quieter path began. And there, in the entrance of a small cave pressed into the reef wall, sat a mama fish.
The first thing Oana noticed was Mama Rielle’s pale orange. Like rust from the arctic waters.
Her baby sat in a seagrass basket, blowing bubbles and kicking her feet at anything that moved. A sock fell off the line. Mama Rielle picked it up without looking, added it to the sorting pile, and kept humming quietly. But she kept losing her words. Like a song that’s stuck in your head with a lyric or two that’s missing:
"Twinkle, twinkle, little... starfish... how I wonder... what you... what you…"
She stopped. Frowned and tried again.
"How I wonder what you... no..."
Mama Rielle stood still and, for a moment, forgot what she wanted to do.Oana felt something settle in her chest. Not a sound. A weight.
Shelby's claw found her arm. "No," he said, calm and certain.
"I'm just going to…”"No.""I'll be careful,” Oana said with confidence.“Oana, we both know you are never careful.”
But Oana had already slipped away.
She moved slowly, tentacles tucked, body low, with genuine, sincere, wholehearted caution. She was doing beautifully. She was almost there. She was going to be completely, entirely okay. But then…
One of her eight curious tentacles clipped the edge of a soap bar on the left.
The soap launched!It struck the fabric softener. POP! A cloud of thick lavender burst into the water. The soap kept going and slammed into the sea salt jar. A blizzard of salt crystals shot outward in a white storm. A giant salt rock hit the rinse bucket, and it tipped. The water came running down like a river.
The water hit the mud basin at the base of the shelf. The mud rose in a dark brown cloud. The mud-water hit the white laundry pile, which now became a different muddy brown entirely. Ew!
The current caught the baby food jar, which had been waiting patiently on its ledge for exactly this kind of opportunity, and it tipped, slow and inevitable as a sunset.
Glorp.
Orange purée joined the current.
And the soap was not finished yet. It shot directly into the washing shell in the corner, which started to blink. For a moment, it paused, the way machines pause when they are processing something unexpected.
Then: WHRRRRRRRRRR.
It turned on. Not gently. The shell spun faster and faster and then, with a sound like a very large sneeze:
It exploded outward.SCHNEEEEEZZZ!
A full, roaring, spinning wall of laundry and assorted chaos burst from the machine and flung itself into the open water of the cave.
A laundrynado!
There was no other word for it.
Shirts wheeled through the water like flags. Clips snapped free from the line,Ping! Ping! Ping!
A hanger caught the clothesline. The clothesline pulled taut, swung wildly, and looped itself around Mama Rielle, who spun once, twice, wrapped neatly like a birthday present with her fins pinned to her sides.
"...Oh dear," she said.
Meanwhile, the iron tipped and hit the water. There was a sharp electric ZZZT and a burst of tiny sparks, brilliant and white, scattering upward through the spinning laundry like a sudden indoor firework. The laundrynado caught the sparks and started to glow.
Oana got swept in. A sock slapped itself across her face. A hanger hooked her left arm. A shirt wrapped itself around three of her tentacles. Seaweed looped around her head like a crown.
She peeled the sweaty sock from her face. "This... stinks!”
Shelby stood at the edge of the cave. He had not moved. By some miracle of stillness, a single perfectly folded cloth had drifted down and settled on the top of his shell, balanced. He observed the laundrynado and Mama Rielle, slowly rotating in her clothesline cocoon.
The baby looked at all of this. She laughed so hard she fell sideways in her basket. For a second she froze in the icy water. Then she kicked her feet and slapped the sides of the basket like it was the funniest thing that had ever happened in the history of Coraloom.
"...I was just folding," Mama Rielle said, with enormous dignity, from inside her cocoon.
Oana was now spinning slowly to the left. Chaos in every direction.
She took a breath. She closed her eyes and thought out loud, “We need to fix this.”
The chaos spun. The bubbles rose.The world was loud with slips and cries,but somewhere soft... a rhythm grew.
Her sixth tentacle found the beat,a steady pulse beneath her feet,not loud, not fast, but sure and sweet:a quiet tide that pulled the seaweed.
Dum... dum... dum...
The Laundry Song
Settle down, you spinning things,find your place and fold your wings,socks and shirts and sheets, come near,you all belong in the wash bin here.
Mud washes off and water clears,soap makes foamy bubbles appear,clips and hangers, find the line,everything will be just fine.
Basket here and bucket there,iron removes a wrinkle with care,one by one and two by two,every piece knows what to do.
The spinning slowed.Not all at once,but gently, like a song unwinds.The storm gave way to something else:a softer drift... a steadier mind.
The clothes descended, piece by piece,in careful turns and quiet grace,a sleeve, a sock, a folded crease,each finding now its proper place.
The clips snapped back along the line,click, click, click, in perfect time.The hangers turned, the threads aligned,as if they'd always known the rhyme.
Shelby moved without a sound,his claws precise, his focus sure.He sorted all that settled downin patterns steady, neat, secure.
The baby clapped, right on the beat,with joyful, fearless certainty,as if the whole wild, spinning scenehad always been her plan to see.
The clothesline released Mama, slow,it loosened, turned, then let her free.She spun once more in a gentle flow,then drifted still... and simply be.
The last sock drifted down to land,already folded, neat and planned.
"...Acceptable," said Shelby.
Oana sat on the floor. A sleeve across her head, askew. Seaweed resting like a crown. Blinking at what they had just done.
“We did it!” she said. “That was us. We fixed it.”"...We're very good at this."
The baby clapped.
And somewhere underneath it all —a Hum...was beginning again.
Shelby removed the folded cloth from his shell with great care and placed it precisely on top of the finished pile. The baby applauded.
Then Mama Rielle made a sound. Something that had been compressed for a long time and had found, in the middle of this disaster, an unexpected way out. It came out as a laugh. Short and sudden and real, the kind that surprises you, the kind you'd forgotten you still had.
And then she looked at the cave. At the sorted laundry. At Shelby's stacks. At Oana with the seaweed crown, and at her baby.
And she made the sound again. She laughed, with full warmth. Oana and Shelby laughed too.
Then Oana sat beside Mama Rielle without saying anything. She placed her second tentacle on Mama Rielle’s shoulder. As if to say, “I see you. I'm here. I'm not going anywhere.”
Mama Rielle exhaled, long and slow, and felt a great release.
Underneath the tiredness, the crooked hum, piles of laundry and the soap, Oana heard it: a deep, warm note, like a cello at rest in a quiet room. Mama Rielle's real Hum. Still there. Patient and waiting.
Mama Rielle picked up the baby. And she began to sing — not the way she used to, not the song she remembered — but something real and warm. Something that was hers right now.
"Twinkle, twinkle, little starfish,softly glowing where you are,in the water, calm and slow,watching little dreamers grow…Twinkle, twinkle, little light,stay with me throughout the night.”
The baby grabbed her mama’s fin and danced with her, wobbly and devoted, in the small, clean cave.
Oana caught Shelby's eye.
They slipped away.
Outside, in the lane, they were quiet for a moment. Just the sound of the water swishing and the jellyfish lanterns pulsing overhead. Blop. Blop. Gloop.
Oana looked toward the cave, just visible through the sea fern, a faint warm glow in the dim water.
"Shelby," she said. "What happens when someone loses their Hum?"
Shelby walked a few more steps before answering. "I don't know. I think... things stop working the way they're supposed to."
“Mama Rielle still had hers," Oana said. "Her Hum. It was still there. She just couldn't reach it."
Oana thought about that. She thought about the mama fish sorting the laundry pile. She thought about how tired her eyes had looked.
"Do you know what your Hum is?" Oana asked.
Shelby thought about it seriously, which was the only way he thought about anything. "I think my Hum helps me to make everything around me more orderly. I feel it when I sort. When things go in the right place." He paused. "What about you?”
Oana looked at her tentacles. All seven glowing ones. The one that didn't.
"I don't know yet," she said honestly. "I know what I do. I play music. I love to help others. But I don't know if that's just what I'm made of." She looked at the eighth tentacle. "I feel like the answer is in there somewhere. But I can't hear it yet."
Shelby nodded slowly. "Maybe that's the point," he said. "Maybe you find your Hum by going toward the things that make you want to sing."
Oana looked at the eighth tentacle one more time. It floated there, patient and still.
One day, she thought.
Oana stopped just outside her home, looking back at the reef.
"What happens," she asked quietly, "when someone doesn't have a purpose?"
The reef didn't answer. It just glowed, the coral warming a little brighter for a moment, the way it always did in Coraloom when something true had been said.
That evening, Coraloom became something else entirely.
By day it was noise and colour, mall crawls and baby fish darting in spirals. But at night, the reef breathed out, and everything that had been hidden in the brightness came alive in the deep instead.
The hard corals lit up first: slow red light running along every ridge, like a city seen from a great height, glowing not because anyone left the lights on, but because the city itself was alive and breathing. The sea fans pulsed in waves — violet, then a beautiful warm sunset colour. The sand dollars glowed in quiet rings. A family of lanternfish moved through the deeper water like a constellation that had decided swimming was better than staying fixed in one place.
The anemones closed their petals one by one, each going from a soft pink to a deep gold, like eyelids finally closing.
Above it all, the jellyfish lanterns dimmed to their night rhythm. Slower. Warmer. The way the lights in a house go off room by room as everyone settled in. The reef's version of goodnight.
And deep in the centre of the valley, the Rainbow Coral Hum Tree pulsed. Once… Twice… Three times. Low and slow and deep, like the world's own heartbeat finding its rest.
In Coraloom the songs grow slow,
the lantern fish turn down their glow,
the anemones fold their golden light,
and coral sings the reef to night.
We hum, we hum, a softer hum,
as sleepy dreams begin to come.
The tide breathes out, the water stills,
good night, good night, Coraloom.
Oana floated in the middle of it all, genuinely quiet, for once, and let the reef breathe around her.
Then she stopped.She turned.
Far behind her, beyond the cave, the market, at the very edge of the reef where its light finally gave up and the black ocean began, she looked into the deep. The dark out there was a different kind of dark. Older, wiser, the kind that didn't end. Then she saw a single light glow. Faint and still.
Oana stared at it.
She looked down at her eighth tentacle.
Wait.
Did it just twitch?
One teeny, tiny, weenie, winey twitch?Nah, it couldn't be... right?
"OANA!"
Shelby's voice sliced the silence as the crab drifted up and appeared beside her.
“Shelby! You scared the crab out of me!” Oana's heart skipped a beat. “I thought you went home?”
"Are you seeing that?” Shelby ignored her.
The light in the deep pulsed once, slow and steady, as if it knew it was being watched. As if it had been expecting this exact moment. It was calling to Oana.
But Oana didn't move. Not yet.
But soon.
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